tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18432181.post1965267852996463052..comments2023-04-02T03:35:40.504-04:00Comments on "Nothing this pretty could be real.": MEET SARIAH'S NEMESISSavannah Jordanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06912148806698893668noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18432181.post-90148644797873346842007-03-24T14:29:00.000-04:002007-03-24T14:29:00.000-04:00Hello I was wondering if you would be so kind as t...Hello I was wondering if you would be so kind as to link exchange with me? I am trying to get my blog more noticed and I would love it if you would add me as one of your links. I will do the same for you! My link is http://etownswim.blogspot.com/<BR/><BR/>Thank you!!<BR/><BR/><BR/>-JamesJ-Townhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14907119974698095927noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18432181.post-47062706342489598922007-03-18T14:21:00.000-04:002007-03-18T14:21:00.000-04:00Savannah - Nobody does dark characters like you do...Savannah - Nobody does dark characters like you do, chica! *wg*Tempest Knighthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06974312445961412430noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18432181.post-18745864705724471892007-01-30T10:47:00.000-05:002007-01-30T10:47:00.000-05:00Thanks, Bernita :) I will get right to that.Thanks, Bernita :) I will get right to that.Savannah Jordanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06912148806698893668noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18432181.post-77228596300663544942007-01-30T08:09:00.000-05:002007-01-30T08:09:00.000-05:00You have a couple of minor continuity mis-connects...You have a couple of minor continuity mis-connects here, as I read it.<br />First the fellow leans back, yet manages to adjust his pant hems.<br />You have the body guard standing, yet the main character grabs him by the neck and then they both stand.<br />If your visuals weren't so good, one wouldn't notice these.Bernitahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05264585685253812090noreply@blogger.com