tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18432181.post114178841981319714..comments2023-04-02T03:35:40.504-04:00Comments on "Nothing this pretty could be real.": BitchySavannah Jordanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06912148806698893668noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18432181.post-1142194941983629172006-03-12T15:22:00.000-05:002006-03-12T15:22:00.000-05:00Oh, Michele... Don't worry Hun, I'm not bad, I ju...Oh, Michele... Don't worry Hun, I'm not bad, I just write that way.<BR/><BR/>*MUAhahaha*Savannah Jordanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06912148806698893668noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18432181.post-1142167944163827062006-03-12T07:52:00.000-05:002006-03-12T07:52:00.000-05:00Remind me to NEVER get on your bad side!Those were...Remind me to NEVER get on your bad side!<BR/>Those were intense mental images.<BR/>Excuse me whilst I take a Tums.Michelehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08573730655117969888noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18432181.post-1142006067224719612006-03-10T10:54:00.000-05:002006-03-10T10:54:00.000-05:00Yup, I know you like her! Especially after the sc...Yup, I know you like her! Especially after the scene that I shared with you last night... heheheheheSavannah Jordanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06912148806698893668noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18432181.post-1141940220490862662006-03-09T16:37:00.000-05:002006-03-09T16:37:00.000-05:00I have much lurve for Sariah, but you know that al...I have much lurve for Sariah, but you know that already. <BR/><BR/>*winks* I also know what made you feel like posting this, hehehehe!Heather Khttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00022864805268000224noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18432181.post-1141908892786070772006-03-09T07:54:00.000-05:002006-03-09T07:54:00.000-05:00The last line was very necessary, Lady! I could h...The last line was very necessary, Lady! I could here that one being growled in my own head. :)<BR/><BR/>As to the breed of Were... Well, let's just say she's unique. I don't want to throw out all the plot lines so that'll have to do for now...Savannah Jordanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06912148806698893668noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18432181.post-1141882939410327872006-03-09T00:42:00.000-05:002006-03-09T00:42:00.000-05:00She's a feline? I thought wolf when I read it. But...She's a feline? I thought wolf when I read it. But I'm usually a reader who makes up their own story when they read... I think it's the writer in me. <BR/><BR/>These particular lines were so descriptive that they overrode my own story going on.<BR/><BR/>"She laughed, a sick barking sound in the lonesome dark."<BR/><BR/>"She growled, low and long, and then tipped her nose to the moon and loosed a raged howl."<BR/><BR/>"Sariah let out a short yelp"<BR/><BR/>"She buried her muzzle"<BR/><BR/>"she mocked between pointed predator fangs"<BR/><BR/>Good piece... And I love the last line.<BR/><BR/>Lady MWagerWitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00214977648810644363noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18432181.post-1141874577117853172006-03-08T22:22:00.000-05:002006-03-08T22:22:00.000-05:00Welcome Anon! I am currently working on Sariah's ...Welcome Anon! I am currently working on Sariah's story, along with a few other WIP's. But, this bitch is pretty insistent! :)Savannah Jordanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06912148806698893668noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18432181.post-1141857343014641122006-03-08T17:35:00.000-05:002006-03-08T17:35:00.000-05:00From a bookdealers POV would love to see more of t...From a bookdealers POV would love to see more of this Sariah. She sounds like a best seller to meAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18432181.post-1141823914950255102006-03-08T08:18:00.000-05:002006-03-08T08:18:00.000-05:00Savannah, it is that extension of character or sit...Savannah, it is that extension of character or situation or action that lifts your writing - as I've said before - way above the mundane.Bernitahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05264585685253812090noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18432181.post-1141823406772217572006-03-08T08:10:00.000-05:002006-03-08T08:10:00.000-05:00Tsavo~The dark, visceral scenes have a certain bea...Tsavo~<BR/>The dark, visceral scenes have a certain beauty, I think; but not sensuality.<BR/><BR/>And, no, no flower arranging, for character or author.<BR/><BR/>Bernita~<BR/>You saucy minx! You pick up every little nuance, don't you?? :)Savannah Jordanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06912148806698893668noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18432181.post-1141822047590092092006-03-08T07:47:00.000-05:002006-03-08T07:47:00.000-05:00What is particularly good is how consistent you ar...What is particularly good is how consistent you are with the feline were...the urine, the kicking dirt.<BR/>Heh, heh.Bernitahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05264585685253812090noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18432181.post-1141821796830541992006-03-08T07:43:00.000-05:002006-03-08T07:43:00.000-05:00Hell hath no fury...?Yep, no erotica here, unless ...Hell hath no fury...?<BR/><BR/>Yep, no erotica here, unless shattered limbs and ruptured abdomens are your thing.<BR/><BR/>Swift, brutal, and very vivid. Something tells me Sariah isn't the type to do flower arranging in her spare time : )Tsavo Leonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10346767165918999909noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18432181.post-1141821022288313642006-03-08T07:30:00.000-05:002006-03-08T07:30:00.000-05:00He ticked her off. I'm not sure exactly how, yet...He ticked her off. I'm not sure exactly how, yet; something personal, something intimate.<BR/><BR/>Plus, he's a male. Sariah eats them for breakfast.Savannah Jordanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06912148806698893668noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18432181.post-1141816122669517312006-03-08T06:08:00.000-05:002006-03-08T06:08:00.000-05:00Really, really good physical description of the at...Really, really good physical description of the attack.<BR/>So many pull their punches.<BR/>I'm wondering though: wadidhedo? Waddidhedo?Bernitahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05264585685253812090noreply@blogger.com